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posted by [identity profile] goddessofbirth.livejournal.com at 11:55pm on 11/11/2011
PERFECT!!! I think we definitely need the scene where they meet, now having read each others poems.

So much to love - one of my favorite parts was Jayne ruminating on how the best poetry was found on bathroom walls, as well as him being pissed River might think the Alliance 'made' her. I always like fics where Jayne talks some sense into her about that crap.

Oh, oh...also him getting distracted by thinking about spanking her...
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posted by [identity profile] revdorothyl.livejournal.com at 12:52am on 12/11/2011
I think we definitely need the scene where they meet, now having read each others poems.

Hmmm...!

I started out imagining this as a sort of "Much Ado About Nothing" scene (at least, in the Emma Thompson movie version, which is all I've seen!) with Beatrice and Benedick, when Hero and Claudio each insist on revealing the love letters/poems that the two battling lovers have written to each other but never admitted to out loud, and Beatrice and Benedick each get a chance to read what the other has written, to the amusement of their watching friends and family.

I'm so glad you enjoyed, and I'll see if I can come up with one more chapter, at some point, to show them getting their verbal and non-verbal communication straight.
Edited Date: 2011-11-12 12:52 am (UTC)
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